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my ears are ringing
my eyes are burning
my heart is racing
my stomach's turning
I'm not
the person I use to be
these walls
are closing in on me
I'm too high to think
yet I feel so low
who am I? what am I?
I don't even know
I scream, I cry,
I bleed, I shout
I'm lost
and there is no way out



~ashley carver
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itsgot2bme Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2004
another amazing poem as usual from you :P

the flow and rhythem is this strenghts the feeling of confusion and helplessness. great job.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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UnLoVeDpOeT Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2004
*gives you a map* find your way out now..
but seriously... you'll get out of this i promise :)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
lol :aww:thanks:hug:
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X-GloomCookie-X Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004  Professional Photographer
feeling is all to familiar. Very nice job with the flow again and I think that you described alot of what people have felt before, good job -kia
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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velvetdrusilla Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2004
Wow, this is beautiful. There's like a sense of confusion in it that I feel like I can relate to. :+fav:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:blowkiss:
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deadreflection13 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2004
:clap:!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
haha:giggle:you little perv;)
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DevilsKitty Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004
wow awesome poem! i feel like i can relate in a very high level... a fav for me! :trophy:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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zorchmedia Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004
I love the way you weave a twisted tapestry with words..this one is like falling into someones scream , spinning in a vortex of dark negative thought fragments......It is short, but says volumes to one who has been there....
Dont ever think of doing anything tragic to yourself....we all need you! :heart::hug:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you I'm glad you like it:hug::blowkiss:
and hey I've made it this far if I'm not dead yet I ain't goin' anywhere;)
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Banana-Rama Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2004   Writer
:tears: How beautifully tragic!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
why thank you;)
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Banana-Rama Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004   Writer
Anytime. Just start feeling better :cuddle:
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loserskater Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2004   Writer
I likes it
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
thnks:D
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
:bow::blowkiss:

thanks doll;)
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TwistedLittleStar Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2004
:aww: you're very welcome, my dear :hump: lol
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe :strip:
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TwistedLittleStar Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004
:drool: strippers!! :hump: lol
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
haha:giggle:you little perv;)
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TwistedLittleStar Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2004
shh, nobody knows about that...... *paranoid*
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LiquidNine Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2004  Hobbyist
:) very nice. :heart:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks sweety:hug:
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