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You used to be my hero
You used to take my pain away
You used to be the one who'd tell me
That everything would be okay
You promised you would be back soon
And I've been waiting here for you
You told me that you love me
And I believed you too
Why'd you always say
It would be okay?
When you never cared,
You threw my heart away
And I thought I knew
That our love was true
But it never ever
Was to you
You used to be my hero
You used to wipe my tears away
But now you are the reason
For the tears that I cry everyday
How could you rip my heart
Right through my chest?
Now I see,
You're just like all the rest
I thought this was something
You would never do
To think all this time,
I thought I knew you
You used to be my hero
You used to take my pain away
But now you are the reason
For the pain I feel everyday
Because I thought you were
The one for me
I thought that we
Were meant to be
All this time,
I couldn't see
Now you're just
A tainted memory
You told me that you love me
I guess it isn't true
You promised you would be back soon

I'm still waiting here for you...


(This isn't how it's supposed to be...
I'm nothing to you - You're everything to me)
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kingofnight246 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
HOLY CROW!!!!
you are an amazing Poet
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:iconthe-blackest-parader:
This is truly wonderful. I love it.
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borysswiecicki Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2008
so sad...
but so beautifull...

thank YOU skinnylittleschizo...
i understood things that i don't understand before
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milk254 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2008
that is a nice poem:3
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rayallison Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2007
i love it
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VeninCuCiocolata Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2007
true!:| :(
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abrokenpoetforlove Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2007   Writer
like it alot, i feel the same my gf just left me after 3 years dating 5 years as best friends, this really hits home to me, i likie it alot, wow
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BurningEmbers Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2007
This one's really great! :)
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coolvamp007 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2005
Wonderful, as always. You are a fantastic writer.
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raven-is-my-name-tt Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2005   Writer
wow that was beautiful and the perfct ending

(This isn't how it's supposed to be...
I'm nothing to you - You're everything to me)

I love it!! :luvfave:
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darquiel Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2005  Hobbyist Artist
Goodness that is awesome.
I love the art work you used as well.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:glomp:
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fractalspirit Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2005   Digital Artist
I understand & I can realate to this poem... however you have such wonderful gallery here... I love the way you put those photo manips... and the poetry are great too ... full of inner feelings... while this one, I think it's dealing more with friendship... I have the same kind of things that I have to deal with... same as this poem ... =D keep up your great work!
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SomberBallad Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2005   Writer
I LOVE this poem, I can really relate, I hope that feeling doesn't last too long...good job.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:hug:
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ragdollmystery Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2005   Writer
i love it like the rest! keep on keeping up!
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torrinlover Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2005   Photographer
great work on the mix of the photoes, and on the poem. really emotional both of them :)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:heart:
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xVirusxofxLifex Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2005   Writer
assholes who left and wont come back............its a bitch but hopefully it will all end in suicide...........well........maybe just forgetting.....
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bleeding-angel666 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2005
i really like it, and sadly i can relate. Great piece :D
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nightmandl Featured By Owner May 20, 2005
wish i saw this one sooner, it's amazing!

i've missed your writing and this is why!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 21, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thanks:hug: How've you been? Anything new?
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mNotLikeMostGuys Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2005
I'm not even going to try... this piece is too great for any words of mine :tears:
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D-Monix Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2005   Writer
Words written from pure beauty, i love it :clap: :clap:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:glomp:
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WrappedInPlastic Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2005
Gah. I meant to say I love the way you repeat parts. Like a song were the chorus is basicly the same with a few changes. I like that alot. And the rhyming. :heart:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:thank you:aww:
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WrappedInPlastic Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2005
:heart: I love it. It made me cry and I'm in class so it looks kinda weird. As always I love it. God I know those feelings indeed. Not a time for Bryan to bitch about past relationships though. :D Great work hun. :heart:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thank you:heart:
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forbiddensnowflake Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2005
you need to think about adding pagebreaks to this one because it looks really squashed up right now and that makes it incredibly difficult to read.

the rhythm is a little awkward as well, and some of the rhymes seem a bit forced and cliche.
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ashlynn052006 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2005   Writer
I love it, it almost made me cry, because it reminds me of alot of things going on in my life...
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touwtje Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2005
Wow..you blended the rose in beautifully..lovely textures!..I'm Really glad you left the ant on the rose!..most people that have used this as stock took him away :/
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah I like the ant:aww: I'm glad you liked this:hug:
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Hadadelanoche Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2005   Photographer
It is so lovely... and so true
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Hadadelanoche Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2005   Photographer
It so beautiful...
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Absalom0 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2005
sad.. but beautiful. I like this one as I like the others i've read. I really love how you write.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thanks:hug:
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sunshinevirus Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2005  Professional Writer
eww. i hate those feelings man. i will overcome. and change my attitiude before i have to believe me
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bloodyKiss666 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2005
senseless words with meanings....:O....:aww: ....your words rule my heart....
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blackorchid5583 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2005
Incrediable poem, beautiful photo wanderful job :D
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks very much:heart:
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blackorchid5583 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2005
Your welcome :D
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kittiesdontsmoke Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2005
wow. how intense it that. i read this one the same as the one before it, calmly. they both have the same feel and i like this style. it is different from your previous work which is loud and extravegant. you did a wonderful job! and i love the preview
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thanks:hug:
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kittiesdontsmoke Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2005
:glomp: MEW! @_@
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theAnkh Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2005
I love the use of textures and emotion here.. The color tones blend nicely, with just enough contrast.. Beautiful model too. :rose:

xKia Lola (admin)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks very much:heart:
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LipeCau Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2005
wow too
damn, I wish I could write stuff like this T.T
I suck...
Who cares?
You rule!
I care ^^
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thank you:D
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TwistedLittleStar Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2005
just...wow....

i am officially convinced you're a genius!

:heart:
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