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There is a sickness, a fatal disease
an illness inside that nobody sees
bit by bit, it eats away at your heart
completely tearing you apart
you'll know when it's about to begin
you'll feel like your chest is caving in
it never sleeps, it never dies
it feeds off fragile and innocent lives
you can try your very best
but know that it will never rest
it makes you weak, it makes you sad
it makes you cut, it drives you mad
you'll never escape it, you'll never be free
and I know for a fact cuz the sickness killed me



-Ashley Carver
This is the second collab I have done with He did the art. See how incredibly talented he is:) thanks Jonathan you did an awesome job:hug:
Poem by me:D
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Sniper0092 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice.
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ichisluv1 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2010
Nice sonnet! Its really difficult to write sonnets... Is this shakespearean?
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iPsychoKitteh Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
I love it. It reminded me of love. Wonderful piece.
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Lyris-siryl Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2009
This is frickin' brilliant! One of the best poems I've read in a while now.
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UnFunnyJester Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
nicely written
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occasion-bitch Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
The flow of this is excellent and it really suits the image as well
:+fav:
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AlkalineTrioGirl Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009
i would suggest using 'for' in the place of 'cuz' on the last line, but i like it.
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nikkiswimmer Featured By Owner May 16, 2008
I never thought it would be so possible for a stranger to describe exactly who I am and how I feel.
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emcstyle Featured By Owner May 23, 2007
Very good!
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spysays Featured By Owner May 22, 2007   Writer
if I commented what would it take for you to reply?
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