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There is a sickness, a fatal disease
an illness inside that nobody sees
bit by bit, it eats away at your heart
completely tearing you apart
you'll know when it's about to begin
you'll feel like your chest is caving in
it never sleeps, it never dies
it feeds off fragile and innocent lives
you can try your very best
but know that it will never rest
it makes you weak, it makes you sad
it makes you cut, it drives you mad
you'll never escape it, you'll never be free
and I know for a fact cuz the sickness killed me



-Ashley Carver
This is the second collab I have done with He did the art. See how incredibly talented he is:) thanks Jonathan you did an awesome job:hug:
Poem by me:D
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Sniper0092 Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice.
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:iconichisluv1:
Nice sonnet! Its really difficult to write sonnets... Is this shakespearean?
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:iconipsychokitteh:
I love it. It reminded me of love. Wonderful piece.
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:iconlyris-siryl:
This is frickin' brilliant! One of the best poems I've read in a while now.
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UnFunnyJester Jun 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
nicely written
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occasion-bitch Mar 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
The flow of this is excellent and it really suits the image as well
:+fav:
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:iconalkalinetriogirl:
i would suggest using 'for' in the place of 'cuz' on the last line, but i like it.
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:iconnikkiswimmer:
I never thought it would be so possible for a stranger to describe exactly who I am and how I feel.
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spysays May 22, 2007   Writer
if I commented what would it take for you to reply?
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