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Sometimes it's hard for me to trust
But sometimes I'm too naive
Sometimes these walls close in on me
And it gets hard to breath

Sometimes I feel like I'm falling
Sometimes I don't even care
When you've been falling for this long,
You just can't wait to get there

Sometimes I cut my wrists
Just to watch them bleed
To make sure I still exist
Sometimes it's what I need

Sometimes I think you love me
Sometimes I think that you don't care
Sometimes I find myself wondering
If you're even really there

Because sometimes it's hard to tell
What's real and what's pretend
I used to think that none of this
Would matter in the end

But now you're laughing at me
And you think that I don't hear
But your voice replays inside my head
Now everything's too clear

Sometimes it hurts to open my eyes
Sometimes things seem too real
Sometimes I cover it up with lies
Sometimes I used to feel...
Girl is me, original photo should be in my stock gallery soon.
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DerKleineFreak Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2008
couldn't find words to tell how much i love this poem ... that one and One More Time are my absolute favourites ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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kitty-p Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2007
beautiful poem!
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u-think-you-know-me Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2007
great job! Very emotional piece :)
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Droubi Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2006
it couldn't be any better, wonderful peice of writing :)
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wesleyJ Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2006
:omfg: ~skinnylittleschizo strikes again!
:+fav:
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StuartR Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2006
Brilliant piece, great rhyming, your ideas are put across really well :)
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Sadistic-Sabotage Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2006
Bloody amazing. A feeling I know all too well. :+favlove:
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esopoemface Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2005  Student Writer
you're awesome
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
haha thank you, right back at ya!;)
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AngelSanSan Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2005
I really like this poem... u put that feeling into such great descriptiveness *favs it*
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