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Sometimes it's hard for me to trust
But sometimes I'm too naive
Sometimes these walls close in on me
And it gets hard to breath

Sometimes I feel like I'm falling
Sometimes I don't even care
When you've been falling for this long,
You just can't wait to get there

Sometimes I cut my wrists
Just to watch them bleed
To make sure I still exist
Sometimes it's what I need

Sometimes I think you love me
Sometimes I think that you don't care
Sometimes I find myself wondering
If you're even really there

Because sometimes it's hard to tell
What's real and what's pretend
I used to think that none of this
Would matter in the end

But now you're laughing at me
And you think that I don't hear
But your voice replays inside my head
Now everything's too clear

Sometimes it hurts to open my eyes
Sometimes things seem too real
Sometimes I cover it up with lies
Sometimes I used to feel...
Girl is me, original photo should be in my stock gallery soon.
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:iconderkleinefreak:
DerKleineFreak Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2008
couldn't find words to tell how much i love this poem ... that one and One More Time are my absolute favourites ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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kitty-p Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2007
beautiful poem!
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u-think-you-know-me Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2007
great job! Very emotional piece :)
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Droubi Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2006
it couldn't be any better, wonderful peice of writing :)
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wesleyJ Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2006
:omfg: ~skinnylittleschizo strikes again!
:+fav:
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StuartR Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2006
Brilliant piece, great rhyming, your ideas are put across really well :)
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Sadistic-Sabotage Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2006
Bloody amazing. A feeling I know all too well. :+favlove:
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esopoemface Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2005  Student Writer
you're awesome
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:iconskinnylittleschizo:
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
haha thank you, right back at ya!;)
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AngelSanSan Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2005
I really like this poem... u put that feeling into such great descriptiveness *favs it*
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drgngrl Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2005
this is really great!~ Jsut so u know it was on today's favorties in poetry (thats where i found it) Great JOb!!!!! :w00t: :clap:
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:iconskinnylittleschizo:
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Todays? Really? but I submitted it almost a week ago:confused: hehe weird
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drgngrl Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2005
yea well....the favorites arent ever just submitted.....maybe at least a couple days old. again, great job on the poem!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:hug:
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drgngrl Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2005
np :glomp:
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deathrosekitty Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2005
I feel so close to this poem I loved it. (faves.)
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Mykemicalfailur Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2005
wow. this hit me pretty hard. :'( it's wonderful. you did an amazing job!
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woodsman123452001 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2005
This is really good -- I think you are in touch. I especially liked the line about falling so long you can't wait to get there.
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:iconskinnylittleschizo:
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:heart:
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woodsman123452001 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2005
I enjoyed touring your site -- some very nice eyes.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thank you:p
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woodsman123452001 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2005
You are welcome;)
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Knock-out Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2005
really nicely written. a style i understand lol.

gorgeous
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:)
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angelsynn Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2005
:judge:I can relate so well to this poem. Life is harsh at times. And love... love is painful. I like this poem alot.=)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:)
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WoundedWeapon Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005
really amazing, i'm glad i stopped by the recent deviations to find this.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:heart:
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slav3r Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005
*sigh* sometimes you just miss those days. Other times the sharp stench of Iron just isn't enough.
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f0r3verUs3d Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005
i like this one..probably one of your best..
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:hug:
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Absalom0 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005
Sometimes I think you love me
Sometimes I think that you don't care
Sometimes I find myself wondering
If you're even really there

:hug:
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wintersnexus Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its a beautiful peom so emotional......i love it.........i know what that feels like.........
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:)
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kairesdream Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
I can so relate to that. I'm just like that. I r teh emo >.>; I'm faving this
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littlemissoutcast Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005
very intense, i love it, just like all of your other works.
love littlemissoutcast
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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prufock Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005   Writer
I just have to comment because it's one of my pet peeves:
It's "breathe," not "breath."
Breathe is the verb, breath is the noun.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol ahh true true
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cryingforsalvation Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005
thats the stuff, i was looking for things like this here, before i started writing on my own...

btw comments on my poetry please, even bad......
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Tinsel-Wig Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005   Writer
Incredible! :+favlove:
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:iconmimimarquez:
MimiMarquez Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005
:hug: :clap: u always manage to write amazing poetry that is sooooooo easy to relate 2 :clap:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:glomp:
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Sabrae101 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005
Same here. I can identify really well.
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Aroke Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005
Wow! And I can identify too...
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Artus-Penkawr Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005
gosh...

what a beautiful poem...
making me sad 'cause it coressponds to me...

as U2 sing "sometimes you can make it on you own"... sometimes I really can't...

In my :+fav:
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:iconmeis:
meis Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2005   Writer
wow this is so amazing and real.. i feel this way often actually... great job.
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xzumalcken Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
sigh,I can identify
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:iconmeblonde:
meblonde Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2005
thats awsome, i can really relate to this
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moriloth Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2005
:worship: very truthful... very painful... and very close :+fav:
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