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There is this place
Beyond my fears,
Beyond the blood,
And all the tears
I see it only
In my dreams
But it's more real
Than it seems
A place where I don't
Cry or scream
Where all my thoughts
Are clear and clean
The sun gives light,
The sky is blue
No more memories
Left of you
The air smells sweet
And not like vomit
My skin is new,
No more scars on it
The illussions are gone
And everything's real
I finally know
What it's like to feel
Something other
Than this pain
The voices are gone,
I feel sane
I can laugh and be myself
I don't have to fake a smile
I can say those words "I'm happy"
And living all seems worth the while
A place where I don't have to hear
"You'll never get you're life in gear
You'll never be normal, you're nowhere near
You'll always live in pain and fear"

This is the only place
I wish to be
The only place
I can be free
Free from the sickness
That is me
And one day I'll find this place,
You'll see
Someday I'll be

...A different me
Some of you have read this before, I wrote it almost a year ago. I hope you like it, it's one of my favourites.

I know I didn't do the greatest job on the image, should've spent a little more time on it...but I really like the colours:D

Thanks to and for the stock:heart:
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bimb0 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009
Wow. Just.. wow. I don't know how you can do this, but, you can express my feelings better than myself. This poetry is like direct from my heart. Wish i could express my feelings like you. All my respect.
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Incarnadine91 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2008
Oh, I wish....
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FifteenMinutes Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
very nice deviation ^^, you have much creativity, good job :D
I hope you'll check my gallery too hehe ^^
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DarWolfSp Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2007
*clicks da favorite button, goes back to gallery*
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dmone Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2006
This is a great piece! I persoanlly like this one because currently it seems like Im the person talking in this poem. It sucks that the worst enemy is yourself. Thinking youre that strong but when you finally face yourself you lose all hope and get defeated!

I like the last line. Cause despite all the sh*t. . . Hope still lives on! :)

Keep it up!
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Touch-and-Go Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2005
love what you've done with the sky :clap:
the colors are great
and perfect match for the border
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visciousbutterfly Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2005
definitely an awesom picture, great subject matter!
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shadedangel Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Very Very good work...me likes!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:glomp:
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UnLoVeDpOeT Featured By Owner May 14, 2005
Wow...all i can say is...wow... :hug: hope you find that place soon, but you're beautiful the way you are now.
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x0xSecludedx0x Featured By Owner May 4, 2005
great job such an amazing poem :clap::+fav:
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x0xSecludedx0x Featured By Owner May 4, 2005
great job such an amazing poem :clap::+fav:
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simondo Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2005
like this a lot:)
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WrappedInPlastic Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2005
I agree with umma-ohz. Very like a song from The Fragile. I love it. Very well written. I think the picture fits very well. You always seem to find the best preveiw pics. I also always seem to have my guitar with me when I read your stuff. Maybe I should stop writing music when I've got like 5 other projects to do. Anyway if I can I'll record this one because I'd really like to. It'll probably be on acoustic because my electric is out. Though acoustic songs tend to be good if they're done right. Yeah. Just need your permission. I love this one though. And yes... INSTA:+fav:!
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WrappedInPlastic Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2005
Sweeeeeet. I've already got a basis for it. And a kinda intro thing. I think it'll be a kind of spokenish thing. Like spoken but sung at the same time. Yeah it's hard to explain. I'll note you with more ideas and updates later. :hug: Thank you much!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah sure, have fun with it:D
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sadgirl85 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2005   Writer
hey!!!

I love :heart: this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!
It`s very good!!!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:aww:
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TheWritt Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2005
Why do all the featured Deviation have to be self centered, meldramatic and predictably blocked and rambling and boring...
signed-- a friend
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TheWritt Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2005
Didnt feel like typing? well I must say I wish you felt that more often :)
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choke-on-words Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2005
That was really beautiful. I liked it a lot & I do hope you find this place.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:hug:
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VioletGreys Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2005
This is beautiful.. pieces like this make me wish I could do visual art... *Fav* do you mind if I watch you?
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't mind at all:) Thank you for the :+fav: ing this and For You... :hug:
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justb Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2005   Writer
Adding the word "quite" before "a different me" will do a lot for this poem in my opinion.
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hoyboy1986 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005
good rhyming, clean presentation, effective and simple (dunno if simple is good or bad, yet to decide)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
heh yeah thanks:)
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Kaylo Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005
one word :wow: wow :D
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:D
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Soul-Silenced Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005
Very nice, great work. Good flow as well.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:thanks:
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nalster73 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005   Writer
"You'll never get you're life in gear
You'll never be normal, you're nowhere near
You'll always live in pain and fear".

i love it :D
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:D
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theAnkh Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005
Pretty model, but amazing sky.. The colors are enchanting.. Cute border btw.

xKia Lola (admiN)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:p
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patticate Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005
LOVE IT!!!:+fav::clap:~whistels~:hug:
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MTLV Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
excellent job I was really feeling what you were saying :)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:heart:
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Antherpanther Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2005
An invocation to a poet.

I hear the sound of
freedom found
beyond those swirling seething waters


Brilliant opening. Lovely rhythmn. Journey images clear.Ending finely tuned.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:heart:
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Painlessme Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2005
nice view :hug:
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KiwiRingrose Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2005
This is beautiful, it really shows the hope for change. great!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:aww:
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tenderprey Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2005
thank you for using ma stock for this well composed and well written piece! :) <3
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for providing such a beautiful stock photo:) And thank you for the :+fav: as well:hug:
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omen666 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2005
i hadn't read this before....but i am glad i just did.....its fuckin brilliant
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
well thank you:blowkiss:
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elvengoddess88 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2005
strong words :heart: i can really relate :hug:

and the picture is beautiful~
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