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I'm so sick of dreaming,
I want one night of violence
I want one night of screaming,
To make up for the silence
Just give me one night
Just one night, that's it
I can't be ignored
Just give me one hit
Intimidate me,
Manipulate me,
Underrate me,
Then sedate me
Intoxicate me,
Suffocate me,
Rape me, hate me,
Violate me
Feed me your drugs,
And poison my mind
Abuse me and use me,
And leave me behind
Just give me one night,
Just one night to see
What's it's like to have you
Notice me
I need to see
Your empty eyes
I miss your
Sugar coated lies
I'll do anything
To be with you
I'll be anything
You want me to
I need to feel
The touch of you
Even if it leaves me
Black and blue
Just give me one night,
Just one night to feel
What it's like to have you
Know I'm real
Just give me one night,
Just one night to be
Here with you,

Just you and me
I thought I'd start the month off with one of my personal favourites, both the poem and the picture. This picture was one of my first attempts at anything on photoshop. I might make the border a little smaller:shrug: I was going to submit this a long time ago but had saved it on a cd and forgot about it.

Well I've found it, so here it is

I hope you like it

Stock Used


and Johnnoble on stockxchange
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:icongelun:
gelun Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010
woah that's wicked. i like the impulsive nature of the choice of diction. it's almost like aggression just kissed me in the face.
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blucrimson Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2008
Like your style...awesome piece...:blackrose:
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Bubble-Ninja Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2008
man i love this!

u really hit all the emotions there, i like it

and the pic is awusm too

seriously, great work
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spyro-lover1010 Featured By Owner May 1, 2008
woah i wouldnt go that far just to have someone love me! I mean have him rape and hit you? idts...but i love how you used the pic in this poem and its really worded nicley thumbs up!
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TheFadedAngel Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2007
Absolutely wonderful...
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TazGold Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2005   Photographer
It's wonderful. Simply. But i would make the border a bit smaller, there's enough "black emptiness" inside the white frame.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:)
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visciousbutterfly Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2005
very cool concept, awesome picture overall!
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:iconhellblazer:
hellblazer Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2005
It's very lirical, feels like it has to be sung

:thumbsup:
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f0r3verUs3d Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2005
you are definitly one of my favorite poets..haha..
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:iconskinnylittleschizo:
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thanks:cuddle: and thank you for the :+fav: and :+devwatch: too!
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bloodyKiss666 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2005
Is that night will worth it? But i can imagine it:roll: So yes sometimes.
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alphie-ali Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2005
i couldn't decide which was better, the poem or the picture. they're both very very good. again, i like how u incorporate meanig into your poems, and at the same time keep a good rhyme scheme. most popular (and probably dead) poets have a lot of meaning, but no rhyme. i say a poem's not a poem without a good rhyme. good job with both the picture and the poem. i like em :nod:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:love:
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alphie-ali Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2005
sure, np :)
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sonictempest Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2005
while the picture is quite awesome, it goes with an awesome piece of poetry. :D it flows really well and it's rather well written.
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:iconskinnylittleschizo:
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:love:
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sonictempest Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2005
you're welcome.
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nny777slavelabor Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2005
quite sensual i like it very much.
it casts an eerie presence great job :clap:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:blowkiss:
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onedaynight Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2005
very good job.. u are really good
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thanks:hug:
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staceey Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2005
i love this so much its so real and beautifly written
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:iconskinnylittleschizo:
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:heart:
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patticate Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2005
u know what im gonna do about this (yet again) extravagent submission of urs, rite?! i bet u already know. :gigge::+fav:!!!!!! u did a kickazz job on both the poem and the preview pic.:nod::thumbsup::poke:
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:iconskinnylittleschizo:
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle:Thank you:hug:
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patticate Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2005
ur so welcome hun!!:nod::hug::poke:
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Ananymous Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2005   Traditional Artist
maybe you could read mine sometime, even if it's not as good as yours.

It seems that the pain is what you long for , despite the fact that it may hurt you...
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Ananymous Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2005   Traditional Artist
nice ,the pain is what you long for despite the fact that it may hurt you.Deep.
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scarletsorrow Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2005   Writer
"with blood and gore the night will start,
crashing my mind and killing my heart."

soulfully spoken. emotions and words are a poet's greatest weapons.
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bleeding-angel666 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2005
its awesome, i absolutly love it! :+fav:
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silent-dreams-cry Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2005   Writer
I Love the pic I think the border is perfect.And the peom wOw so
intense just gives me the chills from the reality of your emotion.
Wonderful just Wonderful...Brava Onchore!!!
I cant wait to see your other work!!!!!!!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:hug:
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wilting-rose-887 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2005   Writer
dats fantastic, i love your way wif words well done
hey could u check out mine somtime tell me what you think tell me ways i can make it better
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red-hot-chili-pepper Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2005
Kicks ass...all that needs to be said
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tranxenne Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2005
wow. that's brutal. it goes like a song (something that would sound more like the Anti-Nowhere League than Kylie Minogue I guess ;) ) and i'm feeling like you were listening to sumthin like this while writing, weren't you? ... hmmmm, maybe i'm feeling a bit too much lol. anyway great sounds great rythms great poem
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:D Actually, I think I was listening to deftones when I wrote this:)
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Tinsel-Wig Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2005   Writer
Wow... Incredible and beautiful... Intense...
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:iconskinnylittleschizo:
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:hug:
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Tinsel-Wig Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2005   Writer
Welcome
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RavensTear Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2005  Student General Artist
Awesome work. I love the flow of the words and the rawness of the feeling they express. Fantastic work i can relate very well to it too. I know that feeling too well.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:blowkiss:
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shattered-dreams89 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2005   Writer
Lust is a terrible thing
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ACertainEuphoria Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
both pic and poem are awesome :clap: .... intense; very intense
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Paranoic-Stock Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2005   Photographer
Thank you for using my stock sweetie ^^
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:iconskinnylittleschizo:
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for providing such a beautiful photo for me to use:heart: And thanks a lot for the :+fav:!
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Dyn- Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2005
Stunning...
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reznor70 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2005
Beautiful poem.
Beautiful picture.
:D
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks darling:heart:
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velvetdrusilla Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2005
Wow, this is beautiful, both the writing and the picture.
I like how the border is now, it works well with the image
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