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I'm so sick of dreaming,
I want one night of violence
I want one night of screaming,
To make up for the silence
Just give me one night
Just one night, that's it
I can't be ignored
Just give me one hit
Intimidate me,
Manipulate me,
Underrate me,
Then sedate me
Intoxicate me,
Suffocate me,
Rape me, hate me,
Violate me
Feed me your drugs,
And poison my mind
Abuse me and use me,
And leave me behind
Just give me one night,
Just one night to see
What's it's like to have you
Notice me
I need to see
Your empty eyes
I miss your
Sugar coated lies
I'll do anything
To be with you
I'll be anything
You want me to
I need to feel
The touch of you
Even if it leaves me
Black and blue
Just give me one night,
Just one night to feel
What it's like to have you
Know I'm real
Just give me one night,
Just one night to be
Here with you,

Just you and me
I thought I'd start the month off with one of my personal favourites, both the poem and the picture. This picture was one of my first attempts at anything on photoshop. I might make the border a little smaller:shrug: I was going to submit this a long time ago but had saved it on a cd and forgot about it.

Well I've found it, so here it is

I hope you like it

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gelun Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010
woah that's wicked. i like the impulsive nature of the choice of diction. it's almost like aggression just kissed me in the face.
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blucrimson Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2008
Like your style...awesome piece...:blackrose:
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Bubble-Ninja Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2008
man i love this!

u really hit all the emotions there, i like it

and the pic is awusm too

seriously, great work
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spyro-lover1010 Featured By Owner May 1, 2008
woah i wouldnt go that far just to have someone love me! I mean have him rape and hit you? idts...but i love how you used the pic in this poem and its really worded nicley thumbs up!
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TheFadedAngel Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2007
Absolutely wonderful...
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TazGold Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2005   Photographer
It's wonderful. Simply. But i would make the border a bit smaller, there's enough "black emptiness" inside the white frame.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:)
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visciousbutterfly Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2005
very cool concept, awesome picture overall!
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hellblazer Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2005
It's very lirical, feels like it has to be sung

:thumbsup:
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f0r3verUs3d Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2005
you are definitly one of my favorite poets..haha..
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