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Why are you so different?
You're not who you used to be
And why am I so lonely,
When you're right infront of me?
Something isn't right,
I can see it in your eyes
I'm just trying to find
A truth behind the lies
You act like we're so close
But we couldn't be more far apart
And right now I can't handle
Someone playing with my heart
Tell me that I'm dreaming,
Tell me our love's still strong,
Tell me you're not leaving,
Please tell me that I'm wrong
Tell me that everything
Is going to be just fine
Tell me you love me
And you'll always be mine
Constantly, we're fighting
It gets worse everyday
And I don't want to stay
Just to watch you slip away
I only want to make you smile
But I only make you frown
I just want to make you happy
Seems all I do is bring you down
I've never felt so far away from you
And I need you here so bad
But I feel like we've already lost
Everything we ever had
Please tell me that I'm dreaming,
Tell me our love's still true,
Tell me you're not leaving,
I'd give up anything but you
But I don't know you anymore
You're not who you used to be
How can I miss you so much
When you're right here with me?
I've never been
This scared before
And I can't take this
Anymore
We fight, we try,
We scream, we cry,
We fake, we lie,
We say goodbye
Then you wrap your arms around me
And you look into my eyes
You tell me that you love me
And we both apologize
Then we pretend
That everything is ok
And it is, at least
For the rest of the day
The last time we did this
Was yesterday
And we said things would
Never be this way
But tomorrow we'll do it
All over again
And right now it's the worst
It's ever been
Remember when we first met?
Remember our first kiss?
Remember those first couple years?
They weren't anything like this
I keep telling myself,
It isn't true
But deep down, I know

I'm losing you...
I wrote this a few months ago....

I still feel the same


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Satorstar Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
all been there...an we all survive to love another day..... very well written :-)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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Jade1te Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
I am wondering how you are now.. and if you still feel the same.. did it work out, did you find someone more suited for you?

The poem was very moving..
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, I haven't been on in forever, and just saw this comment now. Thanks very much! Things never did work out with us, we broke up about a year later.
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BeyondYourInsanity Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconiloveyouplz:
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Fyrilion Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're poem is just a beautiful art that represents the worth in love but it's also so true.
Love isn't eternal, and it could be hard to keep on first love in your life
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CrematedMan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Student Writer
:)
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Flaw3d-Princ3ss Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011
This is an amazing writing <3 I hope things are different now~
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swastikakapoor Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011
This is a very real poem! I face exactly the same thing right now!

I wanted to convey this message to my partner... your poem has given me the right way to express it to him!

U are an awesome poet!

Thanks a lot!
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vampirekatara Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
This is so beautiful :D
I've never been in a situation like this, but this poem really made me understand how it feels.
You're a great poet
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techhjulie Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010  Professional General Artist

I just stumbled across this poem, it was in my favs for a few years now.

At that time I loved the way you've put your feelings on the paper and managed to really make other people get a glimpse of what you've been experiencing.

Today when I read it again I could finally understand what you were talking about, I finally feel probably the exact same way you used to feel when you wrote it.

It makes me cry.

It also comforts me,
knowing that I'm not the only one who's ever felt this way.

Such powerful piece.
:heart:
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SunsetontheBeach Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010
You're an amazing writer. This poem brough tears to my eyes.
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knuggi Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i dont want it to end like this... but what if love is meant to die once? do we have any influence? can we keep the love - the happiness - just stuck in place? nailed to a person? can you ever hold it when it is meant to fly away?

i dont think so.



but i didnt give up fighting yet.
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moro003 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i still read this poem and i am still effected like i am reading it for the 1st time.
really strong one.
it once inspired me with this [link] and still gives me more.
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Jujinkai Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010  Hobbyist
I think you hit a very difficult part of my heart, the images that I get from this is astounding....thank you for writing this. The pain in this is somewhat soothing to my tormented soul. :cling:
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00fruX Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2009
wow, this is excellent, and exactly how i'm feeling now. coincidence i happened to read this when i did. i love it!
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dElicAte-SouL92 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009
my gosh this just made want to :tears: ...seriously you have talent :heart:
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Melanie-Browder Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
I LOVE this.. It is just like my relationship with my husband.. Thank you for writing what has been on my mind..
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Pink-crayola-crayon Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2009
This is really good! At first, I dreaded how long it was, but it's good throughout, and gets even better towards the end.
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max121514 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
one word amazing this explains exactly wat im going thru rite now i cried reading it
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SelfImposedExile Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
This beauitful...the style, the emotion....I loved it!
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isabellen Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2009
i love this poem so much. really.
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jadDino Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:crying: Truely touching. Someone going through this would definetly over identify. Great work.
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muntadrox Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
This is so touching. Been reading this poem regularly for the last 8 months, each time felt as powerful as on first reading.
It catched me each time...
Well, about now the moment of truth has come for me - the end of that poem becomes real.
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dancer-lost-in-music Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist
you have a wonderful gallery hun, and this poem is amazingly beautiful and very touching.
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lishalus Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2009
U are awesome...love your stuff
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Trilkus Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very moving and well conducted.
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chilly3 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2008
absolutely beautiful writing
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Shelomtzion Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
hope everything will be ok. there are just some things you can not agree to lose
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TheLovelyMassacre Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
While reading this I began crying. I have been dating a guy for three years now, and I understand this poem to well. This is an amazingly strong and moving poem.
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Phallan Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2008
Wow. I would +fav this forever if I could. This really describes how I feel right now.
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LittleRedShany Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2008
wow.. this is beautiful. It's exactly.. word for word, how I feel too.. I hope things have improved for you though since you wrote this!
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moro003 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i used ur sweet words in one of my works
i mentioned u there [link]
hope u don't mind
hope u like it.
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AIR-EEL Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love it. had to read it twice over
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whenthemooncriedout Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
must suck to feel this way. hope you feel better. Nice poem. hoping to read more. :D
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xselenaraex Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008
wow the fist poem i read that u wrote was really good but this one is soo good i love it ..you r a really good writer
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moro003 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i used ur words here. [link]
hope u don't mind.
i also used the same title.
it fits more than any other words.
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moro003 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i used ur words here.
hope u don't mind.
i also used the same title.
it fits more than any other words.
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moro003 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love it soo much
so deep. so true.
may be cause i'm trapped inside this bars too.
hope we all pass it safe and toegther with the people we love. :hug:
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isabellen Featured By Owner May 23, 2008
I love this poem, it's just the way I feel right now. you're a good writer.
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pretty-mimi Featured By Owner May 15, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow this is so great !! you've got amazing imagination
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johnrichards679 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
This reduced me to tears - I don't cry easily, but this touched me very deeply.

This was how it was... I could have been the one the poem was written for, but then again, so could she...
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PerfumeRose Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2008
So many horrific cliches... And I hate giving bad reviews. But at least I can tell you actually feel this way.
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val0909 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2008
I really like your poem! It's really sad and beautiful!
You really found the right words! Well writing!
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Nemojuanowski Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008
it makes me want to cry
written very well
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Arty-Lara Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2008
So full of emotion! I really love this poem! instant fav
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cmaynard Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2008
As many have said before this is an awesome poem, very moving, it brings to the surface very raw emotion and memory. This is now one of my favourites!
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mredhawk Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2008
Your poetry is amazing. But one comment I do have is It gets worse everyday
And I don't want to stay
Just to watch you slip away
is a little choppy. I mean your poem has a PERFECT rhythm to it until this part. But other than that I really like the poem
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avatarv2 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2008
simply awesome... so deep and charged with feelings it made me sad
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DerKleineFreak Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
omg i just looooooove your poetry! youre awsome! i can soo much relate to your poems .. keep on like that!!
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