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Look into my eyes
And tell me what I want to hear
Tell me pretty lies
Tell me I have nothing to fear

Look into my eyes
And tell me it isn't true
Tell me that you need me
As much as I need you

Look into my eyes
And tell me what you see
Tell me pretty lies
Tell me they're not empty

Look into my eyes
And tell me we're okay
Tell me you have nothing to hide
And that you love me more each day

Look into my eyes
And tell me there's no other
Tell me pretty lies
Tell me that you don't love her
...and tell me pretty lies


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:iconisaacuribepoetry:
When the loneliness don’t let you live, love is an act of self-defence

I like your words. they are meaninful
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:iconourankeybladebearer:
this is lovely. :)

something i could relate to!

thanks for the great read. XD
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:icon-saz-:
this could be an amazing song.. love the poem!
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:iconcrayola-pixxxi:
Whoa girl! this is amazing! Kudos! I think alot of people will be able to relate to this poem.

Good job ^^
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:iconcrayola-pixxxi:
Whoa girl! this is amazing! Kudos! I think alot of people will be able to relate to this poem.

Good job ^^
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:icondreamwake:
It deserves to be a favorite
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:iconherese:
Herese Aug 20, 2005   Writer
Wow, a flawless poem!
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:iconalphie-ali:
that's some pretty good writing. there's meaning, and there's also wht i think a poem should have, a good rhyme scheme! good work!
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starkreality Jun 23, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
christ! youre hot, and you rock! :+favlove:
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skinnylittleschizo Jun 23, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thank you, that's not me in the pic tho...but thank you for the :+fav:
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