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Look into my eyes
And tell me what I want to hear
Tell me pretty lies
Tell me I have nothing to fear

Look into my eyes
And tell me it isn't true
Tell me that you need me
As much as I need you

Look into my eyes
And tell me what you see
Tell me pretty lies
Tell me they're not empty

Look into my eyes
And tell me we're okay
Tell me you have nothing to hide
And that you love me more each day

Look into my eyes
And tell me there's no other
Tell me pretty lies
Tell me that you don't love her
...and tell me pretty lies


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isaacuribepoetry Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009
When the loneliness don’t let you live, love is an act of self-defence

I like your words. they are meaninful
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ourankeybladebearer Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2008  Hobbyist
this is lovely. :)

something i could relate to!

thanks for the great read. XD
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-saz- Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
this could be an amazing song.. love the poem!
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Crayola-PixXxi Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2008
Whoa girl! this is amazing! Kudos! I think alot of people will be able to relate to this poem.

Good job ^^
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Crayola-PixXxi Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2008
Whoa girl! this is amazing! Kudos! I think alot of people will be able to relate to this poem.

Good job ^^
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DreamWake Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2005
It deserves to be a favorite
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:iconherese:
Herese Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2005   Writer
Wow, a flawless poem!
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alphie-ali Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2005
that's some pretty good writing. there's meaning, and there's also wht i think a poem should have, a good rhyme scheme! good work!
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starkreality Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
christ! youre hot, and you rock! :+favlove:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thank you, that's not me in the pic tho...but thank you for the :+fav:
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:iconstarkreality:
starkreality Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
well actually i was referring to all your wonderful sexy redhead stock art...
*sigh* i need a bumper sticker that says "I melt for redheads" or something XD
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
oh lol well in that case, thank you again!:love:
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MissKitten Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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lon3ly Featured By Owner May 1, 2005   Photographer
awesome poem
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xjordisonsgothx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2005
Very hot indeed.
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Rhianna-Apathy Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2005   Writer
This is really good ^.^.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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s0lidsn4k3 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005
That's rockin', man, seriously- I like to see someone who has the same form of a poetic mindset as I do...it puts a smile on my face to read something that sounds similar to my work.

I like the feeling I get behind this...you're actually hardpressed to find someone that will actually concentrate on your eyes when you're speaking to them..
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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pantsdontdance Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005
Very nice poem. The rhyming is awesome
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:hug:
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xxslashedxx Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005   Writer
i really like this poem you wrote...i understand it...GOOD JOB AND KEEP WRITING i'll check your thing later
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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xxslashedxx Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005   Writer
your most very welcome
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chainjamadas Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005   Writer
i love this, it's beautiful. I also hate it because the message is to close to home!
great poem
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for the :+fav: I'm glad you liked it:hug:
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korndeathangel666 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
gorgeous manip :) really dark too
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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Bunnyfugger Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005   Writer
Sounds like it should be a song...but please not country!
Good rhythm...
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
it would never be country!!! hehe thanks:D
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Knightmare-at-9 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
Hey this is neat work. :thumbsup:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:thanks:
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lemming-by-nature Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
Great work. I love it. +fav
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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lemming-by-nature Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
hey, np. Great work :)
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blacktears24 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005   Writer
wow awesome poem
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:hug:
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uxorious Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005
:clap: :clap: sooooooo beautiful :sniff:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
:bow:thank you:blowkiss:
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TyrantOfPants Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005
Now I've seen tons of your work all over the place, and to be perfectly honest, it's very repetitive. Not the words themselves (though I've noticed a patterns in them as well), but every single poem has the same feeling of a jilted lover/angry high school girlfriend. And if that's what you want to write, fine, but you might benefit from trying some other styles and subject matter. Also, experiment with your language, I'm seeing lots of the same references used over and over. I think you'd do well to read some of the 'forefathers' or contemporary poetry. Namely ee cummings, Walt Whitman, Lawrence Ferlinghetti, and Albert Goldbarth (a little less known, no less awesome).
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah umm that's okay, thanks anyways....nice avatar though. I write how I want and I write how I'm feeling...I'm not entering any competitons, I'm not trying to get published...I just write for fun. I'm sorry but I'm not in the greatest mood right now, really don't feel like listening to people complain about my work.
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TyrantOfPants Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005
I can respect that, I just thought you might be interest in expanding your abilities. But hey, for some people, writing is therapy and they're just gonna write what they know.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for understanding:D
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CrimsonRana Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005
so simple but so touching
it's worth to be adored
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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anada27 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005
beautiful
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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Madskizophrenik Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2005  Professional Interface Designer
Ohh wow..that looks really nice...and scary in a way at the same time...well done!!!!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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kasuchan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2005
I love how the image works so well with the poem. KInda relates to how I'm feeling right now. This is really great
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