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I wish I had it all,
Wish I could be like you,
I wish everyone would admire
Every little thing I do
When you walk into a room,
Every head turns your way
But when I even try to speak,
No one hears a word I say
I'm off in the corner
Sitting by myself
Just a worthless tattered doll
Left on a dusty shelf
I'm only here
To make you look good
And I'd break your pretty face
If I could
Your perfect body,
Your long blonde hair,
The life you live,
Its isn't fair
Your tiny waist
And your DD's
I'm right infront of him
But you're all he sees
Your long legs, blue eyes,
And your perfect smile
When I think of you
The feeling's vile
But only because,
I know it's true...
He'll never look at me,
The way he looks at you...
~ashley carver
Wish I could be like you,
I wish everyone would admire
Every little thing I do
When you walk into a room,
Every head turns your way
But when I even try to speak,
No one hears a word I say
I'm off in the corner
Sitting by myself
Just a worthless tattered doll
Left on a dusty shelf
I'm only here
To make you look good
And I'd break your pretty face
If I could
Your perfect body,
Your long blonde hair,
The life you live,
Its isn't fair
Your tiny waist
And your DD's
I'm right infront of him
But you're all he sees
Your long legs, blue eyes,
And your perfect smile
When I think of you
The feeling's vile
But only because,
I know it's true...
He'll never look at me,
The way he looks at you...
~ashley carver
Literature
I'm ugly
I look in the mirror,
hate what I see.
I'm not beautiful,
I'm ugly as can be.
I hate the way my stomach looks,
I hate my face,
I hate my thighs,
I am a disgrace.
I want to cut,
My stomach until its flat.
I want to starve,
so I'm not fat.
I hate my hands,
I hate my hair,
I hate my legs,
I hate how I don't care.
Puke, puke,
Starve to death.
I will be beautiful,
even if its on my last breath.
I'm ugly, I'm ugly,
I'm worthless, I'm shit.
I look in the mirror,
I'm so ugly, I hate it.
I'm fat, I'm gross!
I'm useless, I want to die.
I stare into the mirror,
Until I want to cry.
Dig my fingers into my face,
cut my skin to
Literature
How I hate her......
How I hate her
more than dried up lipstick, spam trying to sell.
more
than the bitter taste of milk gone to hell
you want me to feel well
And then you tell tell
"don't worry about her trace on my cock
and her blood on my heart
we are no more, and broken appart"
How I hate her
more than dolls prettier than mine.
more
than papercuts, maggots and people feelin "fine"
you tell me it's over
done and bye
but I still see her in your eye eye
it's such a lie lie
How I Hate Her
More than sickness in a wound, kids gone mad.
more
than the worst past memory I've ever had
you tell me she is dead
eaten and decomposed, less than dus
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I know this feeling too, and it's definitely not a nice one.
The rhythm you have going in this is really fantastic. The only thing I could suggest is to perhaps punctuate with periods to make things flow a little better/quicker. Most of the time it's not an issue but it really tripped me up and broke the rhythm here:
And I'd break your pretty face
If I could
Your perfect body,
It took me a few seconds to figure this out. At first I thought it should read "If I could have / your perfect body," but then realised that "If I could" went with the previous line.
But that's a really minor and nitpicky issue in an otherwise great piece!
The rhythm you have going in this is really fantastic. The only thing I could suggest is to perhaps punctuate with periods to make things flow a little better/quicker. Most of the time it's not an issue but it really tripped me up and broke the rhythm here:
And I'd break your pretty face
If I could
Your perfect body,
It took me a few seconds to figure this out. At first I thought it should read "If I could have / your perfect body," but then realised that "If I could" went with the previous line.
But that's a really minor and nitpicky issue in an otherwise great piece!