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I tried to listen
To the things you said
But I couldn't stop the voices
Inside my head
I thought it would end
If I could forget
I tried to pretend
And that I regret
Because it's eating me alive
It never ever goes away
It's strangling me inside
And suffocates me more each day
It's driving me insane
I can't take this anymore
I hate myself, I'm a useless bitch,
A filthy fucking whore
I can't see anything but red
I hate this place inside my head
I'm fucking crazy just like they said
I'd kill myself, but I'm already dead
'Cause I ignored it for too long
And I believed in my own lies
Now it's too late, my soul is gone
You can see it in my eyes
This is another older poem, about 6 months...definitely not one of my best, but I really like how the image turned out:) I have a few newer poems I've been wanting to submit, but I want to make some good preview pics for them first and I can't think of anything for these

The beautiful girl - ty:heart:

I can't remember who's stock I used for the eyes It was the eyes of some wierd lookin' monkey thing that I found here on DA but I can't remember who's photo it was....
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Sinthoras Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
Thats exacly what i thought that days but not whit that powerfull Words. Thats awesome work
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Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Student Writer
i know the feeling good job :)
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qnox Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010   Traditional Artist
nice work.. very very deep..
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faerytale-endings Featured By Owner May 2, 2009
oh my, this is wonderful.
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GhuneiM Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
fascinating, if i was holding a beer, I would have said CHEeRs
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lluvialee-san Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008
is incredible, very well:D
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xselenaraex Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008
ths is the greatest poem ..i love it soo much. so much pain and sorrow, and it is awesome somehow:)
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whatsaworld Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2008  Student General Artist
this is "superb" (trying to sound like i know) but seriously this really made me think 4 a little bit! :P :D :+fav:
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TallCanXD Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
We need more poets out there like you, that fucking rocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XD
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Yukiaku Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2007
"I'd kill myself, but I'm already dead"
so very true! such an interesting and intriging peice of work! astounding! nice flow!
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