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I tried to listen
To the things you said
But I couldn't stop the voices
Inside my head
I thought it would end
If I could forget
I tried to pretend
And that I regret
Because it's eating me alive
It never ever goes away
It's strangling me inside
And suffocates me more each day
It's driving me insane
I can't take this anymore
I hate myself, I'm a useless bitch,
A filthy fucking whore
I can't see anything but red
I hate this place inside my head
I'm fucking crazy just like they said
I'd kill myself, but I'm already dead
'Cause I ignored it for too long
And I believed in my own lies
Now it's too late, my soul is gone
You can see it in my eyes
This is another older poem, about 6 months...definitely not one of my best, but I really like how the image turned out:) I have a few newer poems I've been wanting to submit, but I want to make some good preview pics for them first and I can't think of anything for these

The beautiful girl - ty:heart:

I can't remember who's stock I used for the eyes It was the eyes of some wierd lookin' monkey thing that I found here on DA but I can't remember who's photo it was....
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Sinthoras Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
Thats exacly what i thought that days but not whit that powerfull Words. Thats awesome work
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Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Student Writer
i know the feeling good job :)
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qnox Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010   Traditional Artist
nice work.. very very deep..
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faerytale-endings Featured By Owner May 2, 2009
oh my, this is wonderful.
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GhuneiM Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
fascinating, if i was holding a beer, I would have said CHEeRs
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lluvialee-san Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008
is incredible, very well:D
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xselenaraex Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008
ths is the greatest poem ..i love it soo much. so much pain and sorrow, and it is awesome somehow:)
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whatsaworld Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2008  Student General Artist
this is "superb" (trying to sound like i know) but seriously this really made me think 4 a little bit! :P :D :+fav:
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TallCanXD Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
We need more poets out there like you, that fucking rocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XD
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Yukiaku Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2007
"I'd kill myself, but I'm already dead"
so very true! such an interesting and intriging peice of work! astounding! nice flow!
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PsychoSlaughterman Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2007  Professional General Artist
wow powerful writing, you describe the pain well and keep it all flowing, the picture is also fantastic, both are very well done hun
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BreathingWithDeath Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007
This is like so cool...the pain is very expressive and wonerful! It runs fast and brings out very well what u wanna say..loved it!!

luv
pri
:):):)
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SporkTheWierd Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2007
that poems fucking awesome!
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BrakMonkey2001 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2006
I am in love with that girl
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lazybutt Featured By Owner May 25, 2006
Wow, this is one hell of a peom. Fantastic job!
:thumbsup:
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crying-black-blood Featured By Owner May 4, 2006   Photographer
gorgous pic and amazing poetry!!! kudos!
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acidicangel06 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006
i like the poem i can relate to the feelings it exposes..your a very good poet..and the picture fits perfect with the poem..mind if i tell my friends about your poem,they'd all appriciate the value of your expressionate writing and they would all probabl relate to it as well as i do..its great..
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Electrix04 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2006
Great work and poem, very expressive.
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MorbidnoDete Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2006
hey i love the poem and the pic.. who's the model? it looks like a doll.. beautiful =)
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IDontThinkHeLikesMe Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2006
You don't have to photoshop your eyes to look like that, you could make yourself cry but don't blink just look up and let it fill up with tears and then take a picture before they fall, repeat.
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Mazabeast Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2005
my god. This is amazing!
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OhlookitsMatty Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2005  Professional General Artist
she reminds me of a friend i have in college and the strange thing is that i had a dream that she got her lip pierced with the two rings on the side like here and she look so cute!

but she is not gettin it done . . . so i am =D
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chucky-larms Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2005
i've been keeping this poem on my message list ever since you posted it, and i didn't really know why...
but then i read it again just now, and oh-my-fucking-god it is SO applicable to what i'm feeling now!! that is exactly what i've been thinking (inside my head, ha) too! i just wanted to let you know that it's an AMAZING poem (kickass pic too)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thanks!:D
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LooeH Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2005
i dont tend to look at photographs on deviant but this is something i had to take a look at, keep up the work!
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Touch-and-Go Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2005
wow that's freaky
i love how that looks

great job :)
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Maggical Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2005
Woah! Lovely photo... those piercings must be painfull!!! :D

Maggical
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, the girl isn't me though:)
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Maggical Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005
;)
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IamJacksBrokenHeart Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2005
that image goes so perfectly with the poem... you really have an amazing talent
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thanks:love:
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DevilsKitty Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2005
another favorite of mine... i felt every word!
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crazyneko2 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2005
what can say sometimes we all feel this way..
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Greenwolf103 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2005
A VERY dark poem. So sad, too. I know that feeling....
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angelsynn Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2005
:wow:Dark and Beautiful!:alphaosiris:
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DreamWake Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2005
Beautiful and a bit tragic
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ragdollmystery Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2005   Writer
this is very perty poem and the image desplays it totally!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:hug:
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ragdollmystery Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2005   Writer
welcome!
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HalfOfZero Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2005
'_' I find that picture rather dark lol. <.< Scary almost XD
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edona Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2005   Filmographer
wow.. i really like it, it expresses a lot of emotion. the picture you picked goes really well with the emotion of the poem also.. awsome work.
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Fififi Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2005   Digital Artist
I like how it's written, short, sharp and indifferent.
However the subject is cliched, to the point of pure ridicule.
Love, Death, Relationships, Pain, Angst etc. are the easiest, cheapest topics to use. Guaruntees you that at least some will like what you produce by default.
I hope you don't have it in your head that these themes make poetry better and more powerful (to anyone over 14) though, cause they really don't.
No offense intended.
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ensellitis Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2005
Wow, that was an unexpected twist. Very nice.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:D
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xmachina47x Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2005
a w e s o m e
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littlemissoutcast Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2005
hey i am littlemissoutcast
i think your work is amazing. If you don't mind would you read my poems and tell me what you think? Also I think that you are amazingly beautiful, i have never seen anyone who photographs as good as you do. Thank you for writing your poems. Love them all.
littlemissoutcast
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you so much, it means a lot:hug:
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xVirusxofxLifex Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2005   Writer
insane in the brian lol :)
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xVirusxofxLifex Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2005   Writer
awsome................
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razorbladeXmarks Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005   Writer
Wow, I really love this. The rhyming scheme is very good, and I like the line "I'd kill myself, but I'm already dead." Love it! *adds to faves*
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