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you should know not to fuck with me
I've warned you before
but you thought that you'd win this
you're one stupid whore

don't lock the door
I'll kill you, whore
I'll knock the door down
I'll find a way in
I'll throw you to the ground
and I'll kick your face in

I see through your lies
I see the fear in your eyes
I'm gonna make this last
cuz you fucked up in the past
yeah, you fucked up, bitch
you fucked up bad
I warned you, kid
not to make me mad
but you didn't listen
you didn't care
now you're learning your lesson
I'm just making things fair

I'll fuck you up, bitch
I'll kick in your head
when I'm finished with you
you'll wish you were dead

cuz I may not kill you
I just want you to suffer
I'm just gonna torure you
cuz I'm a sick motherfucker

cry, bitch, cry
you know your in pain
I'm one sick twisted bitch
cuz I'm lovin' this game

I can see through your lies
I can see the fear in your eyes
I'm gonna make this last
cuz you fucked up in the past
yeah you fucked up, bitch
you fucked up bad
I warned you, kid,
not to make me mad
but you didn't listen
no you didn't care
now you're learning your lesson
I'm just making things fair

watch your back
I'm everywhere
I'm in your dreams
and I'm in the air
if you breath me in
I'll suffocate you
I'll choke you to death
than recreate you

into my bitch

you close your eyes
and you see me there
you open your eyes
and you see me where?
behind you, bitch
ready to attack
I warned you, bitch
to watch your back
but now it's too late
cuz now you're dead
you were given your warnings
but you ignored them instead
Wrote this when I was 14 years old about an ex-best friend:giggle:makes me laugh when I read it now...I'm so screwed up

Thanks to for the stock:heart:
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SakuraAngle13 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2007
for some reason i feel like that was abut me..hmm weird but cool nice poem lol
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crutches Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
Your parents must be proud.
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ultimatekai Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm...reminds me of...a guy I like...*fucked up*
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WrappedInPlastic Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2005
Yeah... I'll be sure not to piss you off babe. And if I do I'll sure as hell be sorry. I really like it. It's way better than the crap I wrote at that age. Are you still mad at her? Can I :chainsaw: em? :hug:
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WrappedInPlastic Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005
Oh. Hmmm. Well I'm guessing its over now? I hope. Even though I don't know you that well, I still care. (I get attached to easy :D)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol actually I haven't seen her since shortly after writing this...she got pregnant and ran away with her boyfriend.
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theAnkh Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005
I like her expression, it's all nonchalant about the murder, ya know? Very nice.

xKia Lola (admiN)
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sunshinevirus Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2005  Professional Writer
damm, that pic is hoTT... awesome colors n like stuff. and oh yeah..bad ass poem too. i do like words and pictures that match. girl power? man i'm retarded today
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
heeh thanks:p
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reznor70 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
Even back then you did awesome work. :D
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
heh thank you:D
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bloodyKiss666 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
:wow:....its cool.....i dont wanna be that bitch...;p....:worship:...*huuuu..i havent got something good thought..:O*but its great!!!!!:D
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D-Monix Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005   Writer
I'm 14 and i think this is really good lol :clap:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
heh thanks:D
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xVirusxofxLifex Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005   Writer
i like this one lol............its like something a fourteen year old like me would write lol.............
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xacuchina Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005  Professional General Artist
hmm not bad
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Mykemicalfailur Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
I know the feeling...kinda how I feel towards my ex best friend...who is a lieing whore! I mean..I really like this...and I'm lovin the picture! :D
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thanks:D
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Mykemicalfailur Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2005
yur welcome!
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kittiesdontsmoke Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
that is so awesome! i love the emotion and hatred! ill never ever mess with you! and if i di unintentionally PLEASE DONT HURT ME!!!!! hey check out my poem "im gonna kill you" you might like it ^_^ [link]
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks!:hug:
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kittiesdontsmoke Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2005
:glomp:
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umma-ohz Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
were you by any chance listening to extremely large amounts of NIN and Manson when you wrote this as well?
...I liked it actually... in a strange twisted way... :D
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks! I've been listening to extremely large amounts of nin and manson since I was like 8 or 9 years old...so yeah that probably has something to do with alot of my poems:D
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umma-ohz Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2005
woah! 8 or 9, my parents make an effort to keep my little brothers attention away from musicians like that and he will be 12 this year... but they wont manage it for long me thinks because he already knows about Manson and NIN anyway... but i didnt when I was his age.....
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol yeah I listened to a lot of greenday and blur back than too but none of my friends did....I have an older sister, so that probably had a lot to do with it:p
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umma-ohz Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005
yes, my younger brother heard about loads of musicians like Jeff Buckley, The Cure, Radiohead, Led Zep, NIN, Manson, Bjork because I like all of those, but I still cant get him to listen to anything other than Greenday... and the rubbish that is forced upon him on the TV... but i cant expect him to take an interesting in music like Radiohead at such a young age really...
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
true
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umma-ohz Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005
yeh, but i am pretty pleased that he's listening to Greenday actually, i like them :)
maybe he will get into Nirvana soon.. dunno...
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dunn-ciaran Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2004   Writer
This is cool... Did you actually beat the shit out of her? Or just drop it after writing this? .. Whatever you did, fuck 'er if she just, as you said, screwed you over once too many times.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
lol she got pregnant at age 14 or 15(right around when I wrote this) and I never saw her again...she was such a slut:D thanks for the +devwatch: and :+fav: btw :hug:
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xXcutterchickXx Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
Here's the link: [link]
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xXcutterchickXx Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
Have you read mine called People Suck? I think you'd understnad it.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
nope, I don't believe I have:p If you wanna give me the link, I'll check it out:)
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xXcutterchickXx Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
Okey dokey.
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CrimsonTearsOfSorrow Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2004
Remind me to never EVER piss you off! very good. it reminds me of that one of mine you read, "try it again" yeah im pretty fucked up too! but its us fucked up sickos that make the evening news worth watching!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
haha no doubt:D
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DarkInsaneRhi Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2004
The sick twisted mind of a 14yr old! XD I could just imagine you doing that, scarily! Run little boy, run for your life! mwauh.. ok seriously. XD wicked, scary and dementedly cruel! I'm feeling sorry for the ex bf already lmfao!! >< sorry!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
lol:D
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DevilsKitty Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2004
wow this is reeallly awesome!! i take it that the person that is threatening is the same person right??
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, I wrote it about an old friend, who fucked me over one too many times:)
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DevilsKitty Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2004
hopefully that friend got this messege in time lol... good job!! im glad ur not my enemy lol u kickass
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks!:D
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deadreflection13 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2004
i really like it
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
haha thank you:D
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deadreflection13 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2004
welcome
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Aura-da-Ottsel Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2004
God thats funny as hell:lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::rofl::rofl::rofl::rofl::rofl:
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bite06me Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2004
:giggle: Its so awesome!!! Hahaha I :love: it, Mmm definetly am feeling thisd one, eee! you were [are] a crazy wonderous person!!!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
why thankyou:mwahaha:that's means alot:)
and so are you
:hug::hug::hug
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leakyshadow Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2004
yeah.. a bit on the sick side maybe...but i like it, especially the parts that you repeat...it's the flow.
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