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you think you've got it bad
you think you've got it so unfair
but if you wanna see what hell is really like
I can take you there

because hell is my home
I accept that fact now
it's no "home sweet home"
but I deal with it somehow

it's no home like your home
but it's my home to me
even though I want out of here
it's the only place I can be

it hurts me
it kills me
i'm falling apart
even though this is home
it's not chosen by heart

-Ashley Carver
2000,age 15
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KAMELOTrealm Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved the last stanza, nice poem :)
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deadreflection13 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2004
nicley worded :clap: good job :)
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NoFaithInGravity Featured By Owner May 1, 2004
hey i saw your post on the forums.. i faved you
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 2, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:hug:
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perfectlittledream Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2004   Writer
nice......dark......scary......my kinda thing :) it's really good :)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
ty:)
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