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You found me
And you took me in
You helped me
Wash away my sins
You turned my life,
My world around
You picked me up

Then you threw me down

Now everything that used to matter,
Means nothing anymore
I watched the world around me shatter
Just like the world I knew before

Everything I thought we had
Everything that we've been through
Everything I ever cherished
Never meant a thing to you

Everything you ever told me,
You never meant a word of it
And everything I've ever loved
Has either died or turned to shit

My hopes and dreams
Have disappeared
The pain, the shame
It draws me near
Now everything
Is crystal clear
What I yearn for
Is what I fear

Now everything looks better,
So much better from below

But the part of me that used to care

Died a long time ago....
Not sure what I like better, the poem or the art....what do you think? poetry or visual poetry category?


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FadingCookie Featured By Owner May 15, 2009
I it alot.
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super-yan Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2008
nice!
i think you might like my writings
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xxraven666xx Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
wow, love the poem, love the picture, you must keep both or I shall find you somehow and eat you
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xselenaraex Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008
stop..these poems are way too good it's sacring me
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Lost-soul-nagata Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
you are an awsome poet!!
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DerKleineFreak Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
man, i can't get enough of your poems .. gonna add all of them to my faves :D congrats, you're amazing!
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daoboebuggie Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2007
the poem was amazing. i think that the picture is good too, but i just loved the poem.
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Madeleine-dA Featured By Owner May 28, 2007
This could have been such an impressive poetry if only you wouldn't have used that pesky word. Yes, I'm talking about "shit". Call me a conservator, but I believe that such words have no meaning in art, although there is a distinct form of literature - don't actually remember how it's called - which uses words considered "ugly" very often, in fact it has been created for being able to use them freely. As you could have already guessed, I despise that literary ideology.

Nice work though, and I'd choose the poetry over the visual anytime.

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BurningEmbers Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2007
Nice writing. Love the rhyming :)
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plasticinemind Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2007
It's...absolutley great :sniff:
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