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I should've known it
The minute you arrived
I should've known
What you contrived

I should've seen it
In your eyes
But I was too blind
To realize

You lured me in
With your lurid disguise
And trapped me in
Your web of lies

You’re simply majestic
My arachnid lover
Dosage of anesthetics
Ceaseless endeavor

I fought to survive
I strived but you thrived
You took all my pride
And you ate me alive

Crimson tears
Give way to screams
Undying fears
Never salvaging my dreams

I was right where you wanted me
Believing every word you'd say
You gave me the world
As fast as you took it away

You used to be the one
That made me feel complete
But the only way you know
How to play is to cheat

You taste bitter now
Though you used to taste sweet
When I look at you now
All I see is deceit

My hunger to hold you
To have you by my side
Our bond coming unglued
And now I have nowhere to hide
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arachnidlove Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2008  Student General Artist
i was noticing that the first commenter on this said he was the first and that he is usually the last... so if i keep commenting after him his mission of being last is totally defeated...

LOVE THE ARACHNIDS FOREVER!
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bloodyKiss666 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2005
While i read it...One picture came to my mind. The darkelves from Underdark, who loves the Spider Queen: Loth. Anyway there are women rule:giggle:.
i love this poem. Spider love.
:hug: i hope you're ok*i was silent to much time*
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Tinebra Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2005  Professional Photographer
really nice work.. comokliment!"
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lilpink Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2005
u rock
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UnLoVeDpOeT Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2005
Love both the pic and the poem!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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UnLoVeDpOeT Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2005
You're welcome hun!
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anarchy-chicken Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005   Writer
I like it alot! the whole continued metaphor of the spider is really well kept up!
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theblackwillow Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
kool poem
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bournlippy Featured By Owner May 31, 2005
This poem is awesome! I think it's really cool how you kept to the theme of spiders.
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Tinebra Featured By Owner May 31, 2005  Professional Photographer
really nice compositions.... i like very much your work.. but you don't know that i'm really really really... aracnophobic =P
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 31, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks, I'm terrified of them too:fear: it says so in my ID. They're cool to look at...on tv or in pictures, but that's about it:nod: And even then I've gots the willies all night:paranoid:
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TrinityXXX Featured By Owner May 30, 2005
this is amazing, :blackrose: you and = MyDeadlyDepression did a kick ass job honey.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 31, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thanks babe:kiss:
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vespera Featured By Owner May 28, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
The count changes from stanza to stanza which flows off the flow for me.
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mNotLikeMostGuys Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
rock
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velvetdrusilla Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
Wow, I just love the way its written, the rhyming especially. Love the use of a spider as a metaphor:+fav:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 28, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, that was *MyDeadlyDepression's idea :nod:
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zorchmedia Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
Another great collage of strong, disturbing images in both pic and prose...sounds suspiciously like drug addiction, turned to the ugly side...terrific collab. :) :thumbsup:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 28, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:blowkiss:
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Whitedove2990 Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
wow, i really like the image...great writing...awesome!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 28, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:hug:
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DisturbedAngel4 Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
Good job!
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reznor70 Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
Awesome! I have yet to find a poem to make a pic to for ya ;) I will :hug:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 28, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool, thank you:D
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salvadornl Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
wow justy amazing
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TwistedLittleStar Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
this is good...not really your best in my opinion, i can't put my finger on why though :/ well, that was awfully helpful.


:heart:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 28, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thanks:)
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TwistedLittleStar Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
not a problem :)
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kan0 Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
I hope this isnt true... are things ok?
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 28, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, *MyDeadlyDepression came up with the idea for the this:)
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kan0 Featured By Owner May 29, 2005
ooh, ok so this was just made from fiction? thats amazing emotion for that!!!!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 29, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:D I'm not sure if it was on her part though
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absnaz Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
Wow...:wow: I really like this one. Great image, collab went great :+fav:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 28, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:blowkiss:
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WrappedInPlastic Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
Huzzah. I posted the first comment. Normally Im the last. Go me!


I love this one. How did the collab go on this one? Did you just both mix words or what? I'm just :slow: like that. Anyway once again I love it. The two of you did very well. :hug: I hope things are going alright again. :heart: you
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 28, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks:hug: She had the idea for the poem so I wrote my part, and then she mixed it in with her part:)
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WrappedInPlastic Featured By Owner May 29, 2005
Awsome. Well done both of you. Can't wait to see more. And maybe talk on MSN yes? :D :hug:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 29, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah sure! I was on tonight, I don't think you were online though. I haven't had much time to during the week but I might tomorrow:)
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WrappedInPlastic Featured By Owner May 29, 2005
Haha. I was at my friend's graduation and then hanging out with her and my other friend until we got stuck in a damn flood thingy. Sucked ass. Anyway talk to you later. Oh try and find out the time differance between Canada and Texas. I will too. It'd make it easier if we knew that too. Night.
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