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I should've known it
The minute you arrived
I should've known
What you contrived

I should've seen it
In your eyes
But I was too blind
To realize

You lured me in
With your lurid disguise
And trapped me in
Your web of lies

You’re simply majestic
My arachnid lover
Dosage of anesthetics
Ceaseless endeavor

I fought to survive
I strived but you thrived
You took all my pride
And you ate me alive

Crimson tears
Give way to screams
Undying fears
Never salvaging my dreams

I was right where you wanted me
Believing every word you'd say
You gave me the world
As fast as you took it away

You used to be the one
That made me feel complete
But the only way you know
How to play is to cheat

You taste bitter now
Though you used to taste sweet
When I look at you now
All I see is deceit

My hunger to hold you
To have you by my side
Our bond coming unglued
And now I have nowhere to hide
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arachnidlove Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2008  Student General Artist
i was noticing that the first commenter on this said he was the first and that he is usually the last... so if i keep commenting after him his mission of being last is totally defeated...

LOVE THE ARACHNIDS FOREVER!
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bloodyKiss666 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2005
While i read it...One picture came to my mind. The darkelves from Underdark, who loves the Spider Queen: Loth. Anyway there are women rule:giggle:.
i love this poem. Spider love.
:hug: i hope you're ok*i was silent to much time*
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Tinebra Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2005  Professional Photographer
really nice work.. comokliment!"
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lilpink Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2005
u rock
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UnLoVeDpOeT Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2005
Love both the pic and the poem!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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UnLoVeDpOeT Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2005
You're welcome hun!
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anarchy-chicken Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005   Writer
I like it alot! the whole continued metaphor of the spider is really well kept up!
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theblackwillow Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
kool poem
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bournlippy Featured By Owner May 31, 2005
This poem is awesome! I think it's really cool how you kept to the theme of spiders.
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