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All I wanted was your heart
All I needed was you
But you tore my world apart
And there was nothing I could do
Please tell me that I'm dreaming
Please say it isn't true
Please tell me you're not leaving
Because I mean the world to you
What did I do to make you hate me?
I need you by my side
But all I can think of lately
Is why I ever tried
Because now you're so much
Happier
Ever since you've been
With her
And it hurts so bad
To have to see
You with her
And not with me
I don't know
What you see in that whore
Why can't you
Love me anymore?
I lived for you
And I'd die for you
But now I sit
And cry for you
All I wanted was your heart
All I needed was you
But you tore my world apart
There was only one thing I could do
You were my
Entire world
But yours revolved around
Another girl
And it hurt so bad
To have to see
Because you were supposed to
Be with me
But you left me here
Torn apart
All alone
With a broken heart
And now you're lying
On the floor
And you're not breathing
Anymore
I dragged your body
To the car
Things weren't supposed to
Go this far
I didn't mean to make you cry
I didn't want to say goodbye
I never meant to take your life
I didn't want to watch you die
I never thought
That I could kill
But if I can't have you

...No one will
All I wanted was your heart
But you gave it to someone else
So I had to cut it out of you
And take it for myself


lol yeah this poem is a little psychotic...a little more than usual too:p but don't worry, I'm not writing from personal experience or anything...or am I:lol:



girl - ~dani-stock
heart - [link]
texture - ~KahnInteractive
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anarkisti Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
this is fuckin awesome
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EnygmaticHarlequins Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009
I. Fricking. Love. This. Poem.
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deathwithab Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
this is how i feel right now </3....
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chilamantisfrymegood Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2008
i actually wrote something like this a couple of days ago
tis good!!!
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lyena Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2008
i love it XD
hug
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lexer262 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2008
that waz sooooooooooo gud av u got eney more like tis ???:O
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S04tunate Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
Woah... Brutal... :wow:
But I like it... Probably 'cause i'm just sick like that... xDD
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BoarderMan Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2008
This would make an awesome song... I think I'm gonna try to put some acoustics in it... very nice poem by the way :)
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MeanAngel45 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2008
You're so good at poetry! You really are good with words, I love that poem!
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madtrash137 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2008
I love that poem! :worship:
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Livian-lou Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2007
I love it, It's so nice, and gory.
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pinkandblacksocks Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2006
wow how awesome.
i love emotional poems.
:heartbreaker:
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starlight716n Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2006
i know that feeling. this captures it perfectly. :+fav:
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23blackroses Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2006
Wow... gave me goosebumps.
Quite the twist there...
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Black-Birdgreen Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG if that isnt powerful writing I dont know what is..
I felt every letter of every word hitting my heart and soul.... well done... :clap: :worship: :worship:
great stuff
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dark91panthera Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2006
i love your poems :worship:
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stabbing Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2005
wow me and my gf just broke up after 2 years and the first 4 lines of this peom hit home... good stuff tho ;)
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PainfulVanity Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2005
That poem actually describes how im feeling at the moment.
Its awesome
And it made me cry haha
x
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azn-anime-freak Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2005
Thats so awesome! I luv the phsycotic nature of this poem! WOW!!!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
heh thanks:p
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ninastorer Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2005
i love this, its perfect i wish i was as good a writer as you
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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ragdollmystery Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2005   Writer
i feel that i love you now! haha
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MissKitten Featured By Owner May 28, 2005
did this happen to you? did some fair boy tear you apart? i have a similar story. recent and most painful.
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Satire-Frost Featured By Owner May 20, 2005
psycoticly wonderful :blackrose:
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PrOpErTyOfMrWaFfLeS Featured By Owner May 5, 2005   Writer
omgsh O_O omgomg =OOO i love it so much! its like so..deep..and heartwrenching...and dark....and murderous...did i mention dark? oops i have...>_> reminds me a lot of the kind of poetry i write, cept i am very bad at rhyming lol....if u wanna, check out the 2 i have up...haha shameless advertising W00T! >____>!!!!!!!! newayz...lol i love it so much! (already said that..) i love the way u wrote the end...cuz i love killing ppl to! *insert evil scary laugh/face/eyes here* xD <_< :+fav: =O
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CutBlackLace Featured By Owner May 4, 2005
wow that was good. i loved the gore and how you got it to rhyme and stuff. idk i was *amazed*!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thanks:D
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squirell Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2005
Awsome...... and well its just plain awsome! :worship:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thank you:love:
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Shna Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005
I'm amazed because of the superb end of this poem :clap:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:bow::blowkiss:
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Lucy420 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005
Wow this is pretty good. I really love your stuff, your stock stuff and this account. And best of luck with getting yourself better. I don't know the entire story but i can somewhat relate to where you're coming from.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thanks:hug:
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WithxxBrokenxxWings Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005
Wow thats EXECELLENT! plus :fav:
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lilpink Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2005
hiya chicky!i faved this ages ago.. but this is the poem that i show all my friends because its so amazing!! its soooo fabby! and i love it to pieces!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thank you:love:
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MyBrokenMind Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2005
blood :heart:
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bloodyKiss666 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2005
its beautyful....:tears:...i like it very much...
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:p
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bloodyKiss666 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2005
You're welcomee!!wheeeee.....
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javie18 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
*pickes up guitar and makes it into music* ^_^ I love it awesome work!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:D
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Silentbleed Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
Sounds how I feel almost all the time.
I think this is a beautiful, yet, gory poem..
At the same time.
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I'm going to :+fav: this one.
:)
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Cosmic-Kid Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
Hetfy but good.
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Alex-Scaparro Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
I think is a very interesting and dark poem , I like also the picture for this words .
:clap:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:blowkiss:
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poetic-abortion Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
i actually like this.
i usually dont like things with hard rhymes
im more of a free style kindof person or a stanza broken lines type thing
but this is good
i dont get a feeling of bulky generic rhyming
i think its because it has good meaning behind it
a few parts in the beginning made me lose my flow of the poem
and i didnt like that
but i have to admit the end was very good

good work.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:heart:
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titan2781 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
thats really awesome ash... and the picture for it is incredible, GREAT job
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