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There is a place
That I dwell
I call it my
Own living hell
It's a place
That no one else can see
A place
That's only meant for me

And when I'm in this place,
Everything is red
A whole new world of chaos,
The only place I dread

It's made of madness,
Pain, and fear
It kills all hope
Anytime it's near
Popping pills, getting high,
Trying to forget
About everything that I have lost
And all the things that I regret

And when I'm in this place,
Everything is red
A whole new world of tragedy,
A whole new world that's dead

And I can hear them laughing,
Because I'm such a freak,
Because I'm a disgrace,
Laughing because I'm weak
It takes me, it breaks me,
It keeps me here
And I hate this place
More every year

But most of all,
I hate this place
Because when I'm here
I see your face
And I can't help
But wonder why
You would leave me
Here to die
My heart's been broken
So many times
There's still a million pieces
I'll never find

And when I'm in this place,
Everything is red
A whole new world of crimson seas,
From all the times I bled

This place is far too real
When everything is dead
In a place where nothing ever heals,
A lonely place inside my head
Yes you've seen this image before, it's an old hand drawn picture, changed it and fixed it up a bit on photoshop. Enjoy...or don't:p

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kittyfantastic24 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2007
So true...you've got a real talent for expressing inner pain. Love it
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sorrowsent Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2006   Writer
I really like this poem and in these lines your are writing down my own thoughts too: "There is a place That I dwell I call it my Own living hell"(I totally agree with you) I like your thoughts and how you write them, directly and clear!
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lon3ly Featured By Owner May 1, 2005   Photographer
love it.. both.. the picture and the poem.. great work
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 3, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:love:
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Nagymarci Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2005  Professional Filmographer
The pic really looks like you, altough its sad, i find it lovely:)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
haha umm thank you:o
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insainewho Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2005
brilliantly writen
the pain really comes out here,
really beautifull write!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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forbiddensnowflake Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2005
if you're going to rhyme, you really need to stick to a certain beat/rhythm with your words, otherwise the rhyme gets lost in the interrupted flow.
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kittiesdontsmoke Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2005
omg that is so depressing and so beautiful! i love it! FAV!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:heart: and thanks for the :+devwatch:
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kittiesdontsmoke Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005
your welcome! ^_^
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shru-berry Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2005
beloved hell, dirty sadness
eloping madness into despair
or despair into madness
what is fair
raw living wound, conceited pain
or ashen smile
bleak shiny day
devoid
taste
and
hope?
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uxorious Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2005
morbid and sick sweety... I LOVE IT :giggle:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:mwahaha:
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uxorious Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2005
:highfive:
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Bunnyfugger Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2005   Writer
Inner doubts described effectively...very lonely...why not sublet it ?.........then use your ill gotten gains to go somewhere warmer or stranger where you might find a friend ...even if it is still you.
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summerglow Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005   Writer
Hrmm.. well this isn't too bad. If you're going to rhyme watch out for the rythym, rhyming never sounds good unless it has a nice rythym. As for the content it's emotional which is good but how you have it written is a bit cliched and that took away from what it could of been. Hrmm.
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titan2781 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005
i am still trying to get my friend to finish doing the line are so i can bring that picture to life in flash :(
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
well good luck, can't wait to see it:)
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falling-dark-star Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005   Writer
Reminds me exactly of myself....
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red-hot-chili-pepper Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005
Excellent...definitely a fav. Especially like the stanza "And when I'm in this place, Everything is red A whole new world of tragedy, A whole new world that's dead"...Great:)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks:cuddle:
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omen666 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005
wow...this is too fucking awesomely brilliantly excellent...i'm sure it relates to everyone in sum way...it will be faved!!!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:glomp:
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turbopat Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005   Writer
And I can hear them laughing,
Because I'm such a freak,
Because I'm a disgrace,
Laughing because I'm weak
It takes me, it breaks me,
It keeps me here
And I hate this place
More every year

very powerful piece...i like the reacurring theme of:

"And when I'm in this place,
Everything is red"

nicely done.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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patticate Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005
:clap:awsome charlie. genius. sheer genious.:clap::hug: love it!
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patticate Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005
ur welcome gurl!:hug:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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reznor70 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005
This is amazing. You really have a way with words. These almost sound like lyrics for some reason to me. Definite :+fav: I love it. :hug:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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adiareallysucks Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005   Interface Designer
this work is so emmotional
its cuteness too
:D
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:D
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Dyn- Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005
Stunningly real...I had to make sure I was breathing after I read it...
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WrappedInPlastic Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005
:worship: :clap: :lick:
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ILikeTheDark Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005
Wow this is amazing. I wish I had your talent for writing.
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:aww:
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FinallyAtPeace2004 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
You aren't lonely. your on my mind alot. :) :cuddle:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
aww, thanks for for the :+fav: :hug:
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ShilloCjbNet Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005  Hobbyist Interface Designer
aw... i ve a place like that too... except u r not in it:'(

eheheheh good poem though:D keep it up
~shillo
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:hug:
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ashlynn052006 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005   Writer
I think that is my fave!! of everything on DA!! major compliment I have lots of faves haha :) wow I sound really gitty today! anywayz l8er!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thank you:hug:
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ashlynn052006 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005   Writer
yup,no problem
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Destined2Fail Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
:worship: this is amazing, definatly a fav
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thanks:hug:
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FluffyFuzz Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005   Photographer
Love it :clap:
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks Rachel:glomp:
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GuitarGeek Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005
:jawdrop: fucking awesome.
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