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There is a place
That I dwell
I call it my
Own living hell
It's a place
That no one else can see
A place
That's only meant for me

And when I'm in this place,
Everything is red
A whole new world of chaos,
The only place I dread

It's made of madness,
Pain, and fear
It kills all hope
Anytime it's near
Popping pills, getting high,
Trying to forget
About everything that I have lost
And all the things that I regret

And when I'm in this place,
Everything is red
A whole new world of tragedy,
A whole new world that's dead

And I can hear them laughing,
Because I'm such a freak,
Because I'm a disgrace,
Laughing because I'm weak
It takes me, it breaks me,
It keeps me here
And I hate this place
More every year

But most of all,
I hate this place
Because when I'm here
I see your face
And I can't help
But wonder why
You would leave me
Here to die
My heart's been broken
So many times
There's still a million pieces
I'll never find

And when I'm in this place,
Everything is red
A whole new world of crimson seas,
From all the times I bled

This place is far too real
When everything is dead
In a place where nothing ever heals,
A lonely place inside my head
Yes you've seen this image before, it's an old hand drawn picture, changed it and fixed it up a bit on photoshop. Enjoy...or don't:p

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kittyfantastic24 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2007
So true...you've got a real talent for expressing inner pain. Love it
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sorrowsent Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2006   Writer
I really like this poem and in these lines your are writing down my own thoughts too: "There is a place That I dwell I call it my Own living hell"(I totally agree with you) I like your thoughts and how you write them, directly and clear!
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lon3ly Featured By Owner May 1, 2005   Photographer
love it.. both.. the picture and the poem.. great work
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 3, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:love:
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Nagymarci Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2005  Professional Filmographer
The pic really looks like you, altough its sad, i find it lovely:)
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
haha umm thank you:o
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insainewho Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2005
brilliantly writen
the pain really comes out here,
really beautifull write!
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skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
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forbiddensnowflake Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2005
if you're going to rhyme, you really need to stick to a certain beat/rhythm with your words, otherwise the rhyme gets lost in the interrupted flow.
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kittiesdontsmoke Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2005
omg that is so depressing and so beautiful! i love it! FAV!
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