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February 7, 2005
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There is a place
That I dwell
I call it my
Own living hell
It's a place
That no one else can see
A place
That's only meant for me

And when I'm in this place,
Everything is red
A whole new world of chaos,
The only place I dread

It's made of madness,
Pain, and fear
It kills all hope
Anytime it's near
Popping pills, getting high,
Trying to forget
About everything that I have lost
And all the things that I regret

And when I'm in this place,
Everything is red
A whole new world of tragedy,
A whole new world that's dead

And I can hear them laughing,
Because I'm such a freak,
Because I'm a disgrace,
Laughing because I'm weak
It takes me, it breaks me,
It keeps me here
And I hate this place
More every year

But most of all,
I hate this place
Because when I'm here
I see your face
And I can't help
But wonder why
You would leave me
Here to die
My heart's been broken
So many times
There's still a million pieces
I'll never find

And when I'm in this place,
Everything is red
A whole new world of crimson seas,
From all the times I bled

This place is far too real
When everything is dead
In a place where nothing ever heals,
A lonely place inside my head
Yes you've seen this image before, it's an old hand drawn picture, changed it and fixed it up a bit on photoshop. Enjoy...or don't:p

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kittyfantastic24 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2007
So've got a real talent for expressing inner pain. Love it
sorrowsent Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2006   Writer
I really like this poem and in these lines your are writing down my own thoughts too: "There is a place That I dwell I call it my Own living hell"(I totally agree with you) I like your thoughts and how you write them, directly and clear!
lon3ly Featured By Owner May 1, 2005   Photographer
love it.. both.. the picture and the poem.. great work
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner May 3, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:love:
Nagymarci Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2005  Professional Filmographer
The pic really looks like you, altough its sad, i find it lovely:)
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
haha umm thank you:o
insainewho Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2005
brilliantly writen
the pain really comes out here,
really beautifull write!
skinnylittleschizo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you:hug:
forbiddensnowflake Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2005
if you're going to rhyme, you really need to stick to a certain beat/rhythm with your words, otherwise the rhyme gets lost in the interrupted flow.
kittiesdontsmoke Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2005
omg that is so depressing and so beautiful! i love it! FAV!
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